Screenwriting : Loglines feedback and general tips by Brittany Mack

Brittany Mack

Loglines feedback and general tips

I’m relatively new to using stage32 and would love if someone can read my loglines and give me some feed back or at the minimum a rating. Also any tips to how to maximize my stage32 experience.

Ryu Reeves

You can actually write logline in the browse section and click on loglines. Then you can add logline and make sure to set it to public so people can rate them!

Brittany Mack

Thank you

Ryu Reeves

no problem. Gonna read your script since I'm taking a break from writing all mine right now lol gonna rate you a little later cause almost 30 pages is gonna require some extra hot chocolate for me lol

Brittany Mack

Now I’m nervous lol but thank you, the feedback is extremely appreciated

Maurice Vaughan

Welcome to the community, Brittany Mack. Let me know when you post your loglines on your profile so I can give you feedback.

Brittany Mack

I will, I’m doing some script updates first then will have loglines back available

Jed Power

What are the genres please?

E. Nadine Thaxton-Tensley

When will we be able to pitch Brad Wilson?

Maurice Vaughan

Hi, E. Nadine Thaxton-Tensley. The Development Team should know. success@stage32.com

Sam Iwata Aka Liu

Did you post your logline? I can't find it in your profile.

Brittany Mack

Yes, you should be able to see them now.

Maurice Vaughan

Here's a blog that'll help you navigate Stage 32 and maximize your experience, Brittany Mack: www.stage32.com/blog/how-to-successfully-navigate-the-stage-32-platform-...

Laquan Copeland

Hi Brittany,

Welcome to Stage32! I’d be happy to take a look at your loglines and provide feedback—feel free to share them here. To get the most out of Stage32, I recommend joining relevant lounges, engaging with posts regularly, and attending webinars to connect with industry professionals. Looking forward to reading your work!

CJ Walley

They're written well, but they read more like tag lines to me because they are highly ambiguous when it comes to the plot and antagonist force. You can be more descriptive to show how your stories stand out against other similar material.

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