Hi, everybody! I use the opportunity to introduce myself to you. I´m a german independent writer who created complete new worlds in my novel series "Dignity Rising" (unfortunately available only in german in the moment). I would like to ask professional screenwriters, if my story has cinematografic potential. If you like, please visit my website www.hedy-loewe.de or have a look in the novels here: http://amzn.to/16XYJzF If you´re interested in the whole story, please contact me! Have fun and a great sunday evening - Hedy
Hi Alle, thx for your reply! In the moment I have no possibility to Skype. I will translate some of my website pages to tell you about the story. As soon as it´s done I´ll give you a message!
Just a short glance: Dignity Rising - Tied Souls After years of unmeant separation commander Jonathan William Matthews finds his lost wife Shay again at the spaceplatform „First-Contact-3“. His mask without emotions falls and his well-regulated world goes to the bottom. His wife is close to death and she has no remembrance of him or her family. She seems to be a deserter and hunted by the messengers of the High-Council. She takes refuge at the most exceeding place in outer space. Will Jon manage to free her from the claw-like hands of the High-Council? Because of her high-potential telepathy the High-Coucil has made Shay a messenger against her free will and took all her memories. But she is working against them. As a member of the Ancient-Guards she joins the rebels and fights violence and corruption. Herewith her death-penalty is sealed. With a dangerous artfulness its up to Jon to fake Shays death to get her loose from the hunters. Now she is free again, but still without remebrance of him. He seems to be a stranger to her and she is upset about the strong feelings this man causes in her heart. Desperately she is searching her true identity. Jon is dying to get her back. He risks his live to proof his love to her. Dignity Rising is the first novel of author Hedy Loewe. It is a romantic lovestory with some erotic parts in a dystopic setting of social- and guidingstructures in the worlds to come. Exceeding men and women drive the skills of the inhabited planets, each of them different. Heroes and antagonists are looking for identity and personal freedom in a world of brain controll. An intriguing adventure in the year 2336...
Hi Mark, thank you for your honest estimation. First of all I should look for an editor who is willing to translate the book. And I should address Steven Spielberg directly ;-) Maybe there is more success looking for comic-drawers. All the best to you! Hedy
Alle, thx for your comment. My plot has nothing to do with clairvoyance or crime prevention, so I don't see any analogy to 'minority report'. Sorry for the mistakes in the text. In fact, my novel addresses women, even if the best recensions come from male readers. The story has more romantic than technical parts. As far as I understood, that was Marks critical point. Please make it clearer to me what is yours? Thank you!
Hi Alle, thx for the explication, I got Marks point and yours too. my plot (Part One) has 3 main female characters. Maybe I should urgently change the blurb ;-)
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Not to sound too cynical, but since when has Hollywood cared whether small subplots are stolen from other movies?
Hi Sten, thx. But I want to make it clear that I stole absolutely nothing. I guess you can find analogies wherever you dig for it.
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By no means did I mean to suggest that you'd stolen anything. I was merely pointing out that even the most obvious similarities between movie plots won't phase Hollywood. I haven't read your synopsis. My examples would be Hunger Games & Divergent. And I'm assuming there will be at least two or three more movies from different book series before Hollywood gets tired of them.
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My example if I may intrude in your discussion: Mission to Mars / Prometheus...
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Oh I'm certainly not him. Nor do I want to be him. Doesn't mean I don't have some ambitions for myself! ;) I've met a few of his old collaborators online or in real life. My ears need wisdom from time to time... ;)
Hi Alle, this was an interesting conversation. Returning to your first comment: is there anything what I can do for you now? Best regards to Down under! Hedy
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Alle, what a pity you don´t read german. I guess you would like "the worlds". :-) I should start to look for a payable translation... CU!