Here is a project I have been pitching for a decade now and I just rebranded it from True Haunt to...
The Blink Bonnie Horror
Similar to The Amityville Horror flicks!
Here is the Pitch:
When the Daniels family moves into a historic South Carolina plantation house in the 1970s, they believe they’ve found their dream home. But soon, unsettling noises and eerie apparitions reveal a darker reality. As the house's sinister past comes to light, the family becomes the target of relentless supernatural forces. With each passing day, the terror intensifies, and the mother, desperate to protect her loved ones, must confront an ancient evil that refuses to rest. "The Blink Bonnie Hororr" is a gripping tale of survival and the battle between the living and the dead, where the bonds of family are tested by the horrors of the unknown.
What do ya think?
Better?
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Hi! I think there are a lot of common words in the annotation that do not distinguish your project from many other similar projects.
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It sounds interesting, but it's similar to other haunted plantation house/haunted house movies, Mark Deuce. Maybe see if you can add a twist.
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I admire your dedication. A decade is a long time on one story. I have quite few that are that old, but when I revisit them, they don’t seem that appealing anymore. So now, I’m taking their foundation and brainstorming ways that’ll make them sing. Hopefully, they’ll stand out from the rest. Cudos to you.