I recently reconnected with stage 32. I've been writing for the past 10 years. My passion to write and create stories gives me that escape to a world where I feel anything is possible. When watching Superman with the legendary Christopher Reeve, I wanted to be that hero who forgot to sometimes get the orange juice(freshly squeezed) for Lois. With that said; I'm wondering if my loglines need a bit of tweaking or if my stories need a bit of work, before I start submitting to festivals, or maybe just submitting to agents? Or should I consider a writing partner? I'm open to any ideas and would greatly appreciate it.
Screenwriting : Screenwriter, Dreamer by William Monette
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Welcome back, William Monette. Great to meet you. I'm about to check out the loglines on your profile. Stage 32 also has a Logline Review service (www.stage32.com/scriptservices/coverage/buy?id=22) and feedback services you could use your scripts to see if they need work (www.stage32.com/scriptservices).
You could also partner with a writer to help you polish your loglines and scripts. There are a lot of talented screenwriters on Stage 32. You could make a post on the Job Board (www.stage32.com/find-jobs).
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Thank you so much. It's great to meet you as well and thank you for all the wonderful tips.
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Welcome back to Stage 32, William! It’s amazing that you’ve been writing for 10 years—that kind of dedication speaks volumes about your passion for storytelling. I love how your connection to Christopher Reeve’s Superman inspired your creative journey; it’s always special when a story sparks that kind of magic.
As for your questions, refining loglines is always a great starting point. A strong logline not only grabs attention but also helps you clarify your story’s core message, which is super helpful when pitching to agents or festivals. If you’re open to collaboration, a writing partner can bring fresh perspectives and push your creativity in unexpected ways, but trust your instincts on whether it feels right for you.
The community here is a goldmine for feedback, so don’t hesitate to share your loglines or ideas. You’re in a great place to grow, and I’m excited to see where your journey takes you!
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You're welcome, William Monette.
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Thank you so Laquan. Yes, Superman was a big inspiration for me. I have always enjoyed fantasy and the possibilities of what could be. Loglines have always been tough for me, and my lest favorite to write, but I understand its essential part of drawing someone into your story. I'm always open to collaboration, and I feel its a great way to introduce new perspectives to a story. I would of course have to see if it's a great fit. Thanks so much for the feedback. This community inspires me to keep pushes on, and I'm grateful for everyone here, and wish the best for everyone's journey.
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Played with Time Keepers.
A Beyonce fan girl, struggling to balance school- and home challenges, is hired by unidentified men to save time travelers from forces attempting to cause mass deaths.
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Thank you so much for the suggestion Wal. I appreciate you taking the time to read my logline