Screenwriting : Screenwriters—Feedback & Collaboration Wanted on a Bold Saudi Action Thriller by Omar Ammari

Omar Ammari

Screenwriters—Feedback & Collaboration Wanted on a Bold Saudi Action Thriller

I’m currently working on an original action-thriller set in Saudi Arabia that blends high-stakes intelligence operations with deep personal drama.

The story follows a retired officer returning home for his sister’s wedding—only to discover a covert attack that threatens his family and the country’s most critical infrastructure. It starts with mystery and builds into an intense, cinematic showdown involving drones, submarines, and elite military units—all with an emotional core.

I’m looking for feedback, co-writing interest, and even just good conversations to help sharpen the structure, character arcs, and final act. The goal is to create a non-routine action film that feels real, dramatic, and thrilling—something fresh from the Middle East, with global appeal.

Maurice Vaughan

Falcon's Dive sounds interesting, Omar Ammari, especially "covert attack that threatens his family and the country’s most critical infrastructure" and "cinematic showdown involving drones, submarines, and elite military units." I haven't seen an Action Thriller movie set in Saudi Arabia before.

You could also make a co-writer post on the Job Board (www.stage32.com/find-jobs).

Mark Deuce

Looks amazing Omar Ammari and love the movie poster!

Omar Ammari

Maurice Vaughan Thank you so much, Maurice. I really appreciate your thoughtful feedback. That balance between personal stakes and national threat is exactly what I wanted to explore. And yes — drones, and even covert family dynamics all come together in a way that I hope feels both grounded and cinematic. Would love to hear more of your thoughts as the project develops!

Omar Ammari

Mark Deuce Thanks a ton, Mark! That means a lot — I put a lot of thought into the visual tone, and I’m glad the poster resonated. I’m really excited about where the story’s headed and how it blends action with deeper emotional layers. Would love to stay connected and hear your thoughts as I move forward!

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Omar Ammari. Ok, no problem.

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