Hello! I am an 18-year-old screenwritter looking for feed back on if my story is as good as I hope it is. It is a nine page script and I was looking for some feedback within the next week? I really just want feedback on the story itself rather than formatting. If you are interested, please message me/ comment for a copy! Synopsis: Two roommates argue and one asks the other to leave. He gets a new roommate who changes his perspective on everything. A classic case of the grass is not greener on the other side.
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I would love to read your script. Kindly email me a copy at april.mae.berza@gmail.com so I can leave a feedback. Thanks!