Screenwriting : Script help? by Angela Houston

Hello! My name is Angie and I am 16-years-old. I'm new to this world of writing but I'm really loving it! I just have a question. I have been working on two scripts lately, one since December and the other since July, and I need some way to have other people's input on what they think and how I can make it better so how do I go about that? I know there are script consultants and such but they cost a lot of money and I don't have a job yet! (Way to busy with band.) So I just need some help finding people to look at my scripts and maybe tell me what they think it help me to make them better because I only started trying to develops my stories and make them great maybe 9 months ago so I'm not very good yet. The one I have been working on since December is 24 pages and I'm planing on entering it into the Phoenix Film Festivals script writing portion and the other one I'm going to make and enter into the Arizona student film festival. Have a great day guys! -Angie