Screenwriting : This logline has received positive praise by a few, but I would welcome more input from the group. by Scott Morse

Scott Morse

This logline has received positive praise by a few, but I would welcome more input from the group.

I'll Be Stoned for Christmas - Logline:

When a straight-laced high school senior finally cuts loose on Christmas Eve, a wild night takes a chaotic turn, leaving him and his friends lost in the city, stoned, broke, and racing against the clock to make it home for midnight mass!

Wal Friman

Praise in place. Associations speed to Hangover. Maybe shorten by cutting WHEN and what's between the first two commas?

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