Success Stories: AUG'29 2nd Request

3311 is the second person to request my screenplay. The first was Benderspink, but I never heard back after the submission. THAT was Version 3. I'm hoping the changes to this new version of my script (Version 5) can be the one to get farther. I believe the plots clearer, the mascot is more a mascot and less a...human, and the overall structure has been change to allow Jon (the protagonist) to reach an ULTIMATE GOAL. I've even amped up the comedy like everyone wanted, and the antagonist has changed a bit. Only my concept doesn't change, but even then...the plot does sometimes. But this whole getting second request from 3311 is proof to me I really CAN NOT drop "Mascot like my other ventures (I wasn't passionate about those, like I am with this). I dream of the movie and picture the scenes in my head. I can see my movie. Now I just need someone to make it...so here's try number 2! I'm excited to have another shot after awhile. I had a bad week and almost didn't do that pitch. MAN I AM GLAD I DID!