Your Stage : Looking for feedback on Short Psychological Thriller by Raza Auzair Razak

Hey guys!

So, I've just finished work on a semi-surrealist psychological thriller, and was hoping to get some feedback/criticism before taking it to the festival circuit.

Logline:

After the death of his daughter, Daniel never thought he’d see her again. But when she starts appearing before him, it's clear that she wants something. The question is what?

The video's private at the moment, but message me if you're interested, and I'll send the link and password.

I'll happily give feedback on your work in return.

Thanks.