Colette "ByFilms" Byfield, from your comment, I can see the script being better because of the change. It keeps the reader and audience in the present, it draws out a mystery over the entire script, and the chilling ending has an added layer (finding out why). I could just be rephrasing what you said. Haha What is your plan for the script? I'm not sure if I asked that before.
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Thanks for sharing. Those look like some fun exercises.
You're welcome, J.D. Brown.
Thanks, Colette "ByFilms" Byfield. How is your Thriller project coming?
Colette "ByFilms" Byfield, from your comment, I can see the script being better because of the change. It keeps the reader and audience in the present, it draws out a mystery over the entire script, and the chilling ending has an added layer (finding out why). I could just be rephrasing what you said. Haha What is your plan for the script? I'm not sure if I asked that before.
I think you went with the right choice changing that part in the script. Is the script finished now, or do you have to do more rewrites?