Hello everyone, I'm thrilled to announce that my first directorial short film "One Way: There's No Turning Back" is finally out on the YouTube.
I request you all the watch the film and share your thoughts with me, so I can improve as a director.
Thank you.
Here's the video link.
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This is amazing, Darshan Jaju! I hope you get all of the views and attention for this great work. I wish you continued success, and congratulations on trudging your path.
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Hello, everyone the above link is not working kindly watch the film on the following link:
https://youtu.be/jfD94JR0KEE
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Tanveer Pial Sir kindly check the video on the following link
https://youtu.be/jfD94JR0KEE
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Karmin Mosley Thank you for your wishes and feedback
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The technical aspects of the film are very well done! It's clear you put a lot of effort into it. Since this is your first film, some viewers like me might be looking for a bit more unique story or surprising elements. This story is a bit predictable one and very straight, I must say. The plot could be further developed for a richer experience. Also, there's a brief moment where a third voice is audible saying 'Okay'—perhaps a little detail to polish for next time! Overall, this is a promising start, and with a bit more focus on those areas, your future work will be even more impactful. Just some minor things to keep in mind for future projects! Overall, this is a great start, and I'm excited to see what you come up with next. Thank you and congratulations.
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Thank you Tanveer Pial I duly noted your points. I will keep it in mind while working on the next project. Once again thank you for your feedback and valueable thoughts.