Hi All,
I was wondering if anyone is able to help me with my logline and synopsis?
Apparently my synopsis is difficult to follow and my logline doesn’t have any obstacles. All I’m asking is for some feedback/suggestions as this is my 3/4th attempt at changing them.
It’s on my loglines page and the top one.
Much Appreciated,
Michael Keeling
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The part what this is about, you've got well figured out. More about who they are maybe?
A girl living in the shades of her siblings learns witchcraft to malevolently tempt her niece towards darkness and to fight her big sister for their coven.
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The best advice for sharpening your synopsis is to go read Wikipedia synopses of some of your favorite films. Study the pithy delivery of words and how direct and to the point they are. Also note the pieces they may leave out, the stuff that's often harder to explain or contextualize. Pick a few of your faves in the genre you're writing and go dive in. Read them all the way. Often times, it's less about telling every detail of the story and more about having a clear cadence.
Who is your main character? What is the purpose of the antagonist?