The new draft of PIRATES VS ALIENS is complete! And I need readers! So if you'd like to read a fun (I hope) sci-fi/adventure script, and believe you can get me your notes by January 24th (that's 5 weeks away, should be plenty of time), then let me know and I'll send it along!
Screenwriting : Need readers/notes on new script by Travis Seppala
Need readers/notes on new script
Other topics in Screenwriting:
Check out Trending Discussions
Register / Log In
4 people like this
Travis is a great writer! You're sure to have fun reading this one!!
1 person likes this
Thanks, Pat!
3 people like this
Here is how I do. Multiple members have sent me network requests. Mostly writers. So I send them the following message (subject line "Let us help each other") :
Hello,
Since you are a writer who wants to network with me.
Would you like to read my new screenplay? Feel welcome to suggest whatever improvement you can.
Just give me your email address, and I will send my latest screenplay immediately. 93 pages.
And of course, feel welcome to ask if there is anything I can help you with.
Best,
Göran
About half tell me that they are willing to read. So I have received many useful comments in this way.
2 people like this
Hey… I’m a professional script doctor, teacher, and screenwriter. DM me…
1 person likes this
Göran Johansson Cool! I usually just put out a post like this when I need readers on a new script. USUALLY, I get about 20+ people agree to red. This one I've only got 10 so far (spread across 3 social platforms). Which I don't get. PIRATES VS ALIENS... I don't care who you are, that just sounds like a fun time! ;)
1 person likes this
Gabriel Karkovsky It won't let me DM you. :(
1 person likes this
Hey, Travis Seppala. Are you and Gabriel in each other's network?
2 people like this
Dear Travis, nice that you liked what I wrote. Admin here at Stage32 wants members to collaborate, so I have a tendency to assume that when people send me network requests, they are friendly.
2 people like this
I could use some fresh eyes on a dark comedy I wrote, if you're game to swap.
1 person likes this
Scott, it is not clear for me if you ask me or Travis. But if you send me your email address, we can read each other's scripts.
2 people like this
Count me in Travis!
1 person likes this
Scott, I'm happy to swap... I have a feature: A Neo-Western Coming-of-Age Supernatural Thriller Set in the Mystical American Southwest.
1 person likes this
Maurice Vaughan We are now!
1 person likes this
Gabriel Karkovsky DM'd you.
1 person likes this
Scott Sawitz I can of course do script swaps, but comedy isn't really my thing... so not sure how helpful I'll be other than story notes (I don't find much funny, so I almost never watch comedies either. I can count on my hands the number of comedies that've actually made me LOL).
2 people like this
Tommy Gallego Will DM you in a moment.