That was a fun short!!!!... where are you from? would love to talk to you about it. I am an action girl and have been planning a short with a few friends.... could use some pointers from you
Well, does this guy hit like a girl? These guys kept getting back up over and over. Nice gag. BUT - it would be more powerful if you zoomed in to some of the fighting in your edit system to tight shots - intercut with original shot - make this thing only 1 minute. fast action edits It'll be more powerful.
the whole point was that being drawn out like it was and going over the top was to disarm the audience from expecting a gag and more that this was going to be a short film. Which we are known to pull a lot.
Not bad as a promo and narrative but I felt the actors need more practice with the action shots, way too loose need to be much tighter and camera angles a bit closer
yeah we had actors travel from a distance to do this and shot it in only 5 hours on a tight deadline. Was not meant to be Hollywood just a fun project we worked on. We had fun with it.
That was a fun short!!!!... where are you from? would love to talk to you about it. I am an action girl and have been planning a short with a few friends.... could use some pointers from you
Just saw where your from... are you ever in NYC?
Well, does this guy hit like a girl? These guys kept getting back up over and over. Nice gag. BUT - it would be more powerful if you zoomed in to some of the fighting in your edit system to tight shots - intercut with original shot - make this thing only 1 minute. fast action edits It'll be more powerful.
the whole point was that being drawn out like it was and going over the top was to disarm the audience from expecting a gag and more that this was going to be a short film. Which we are known to pull a lot.
Not bad as a promo and narrative but I felt the actors need more practice with the action shots, way too loose need to be much tighter and camera angles a bit closer
yeah we had actors travel from a distance to do this and shot it in only 5 hours on a tight deadline. Was not meant to be Hollywood just a fun project we worked on. We had fun with it.