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Nikki April Lee
Need original reasons for Chronic Depression.

I'm writing a new short script and the hero created is suffering from chronic depression but masks it with black market prescription "upper" drugs. Everything was going fine when writing until I realized I had no clue why she suffered from chronic depression in the first place. I ran through her bac...

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Jeffrey Ginn

People fall into chronic depression when life lets them down and their dreams are lost. You have to ask "What did she-he come down here for?"

Nikki April Lee

Chemical imbalances....... now there's a challenge. LOL. The only bad things that's happened to her in her past (so far) is her parents' death in a car accident and she being diagnosed with infertilit...

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David Glenney

Genetics? Not very interesting but it happens.

Jeffrey Ginn

What are her goals in life? What does she want to win? Why is the Antagaonist keeping her from reaching her goals? What is the Hero willing to do in an extreme measure to defeat the Antagonist and win? That should help you determine what caused her chronic depression.

Jeffrey Ginn

Exactly... something is out of balance; her life, her trust; something or someone she lost, etc. This is part of or close to the inciting incident. If she knows what her ultimate goal is; which must i...

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