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Adam Brandt
Thoughts on swearing in loglines.

An asshole food trucker facing eviction cooks up plans to save the food truck park and win back his estranged family.

I'm always moving towards the fewest words to entice a prospective reader. Is asshole OK?

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L. Tom Deaver

Hey Bill, loving it. Thank you for sharing your wonderful squishy brain, bro, because that is one hell of a rejection letter haha!

I get all sorts of tidbits and here is a morsel for you -- I wish it...

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Bill McCormick

Adam Brandt I'm glad you liked it. I built it myself.

Scott Sawitz

You could go with misanthropic instead of asshole and get the same efect

Bill McCormick

L. Tom Deaver it's not even my fave. That would be one that called my short story a waste of 4,000 words. I sold it anyway and it went on to become an Amazon best seller. I rarely care about insults i...

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Adam Brandt

Here we go.

An ill-mannered chef cooks up a plan to reunite with his estranged family by saving the dysfunctional food truck park.

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