I'm looking for a screenwriter for a TV program, a 30 minutes show, ideally located in Los Angeles or California. Any recommendation? Thank you
I'm looking for a screenwriter for a TV program, a 30 minutes show, ideally located in Los Angeles or California. Any recommendation? Thank you
Please do take out a minute and post your feedback on the youtube page. It will be of great help. Thank you. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QkNQrdEo_PA
Well first off, the filmmaker asked for feedback of which I gave... If the filmmaker would like me to elaborate on my comment, I would by more than happy to do so, but if someone other than the filmma...
Expand commentWell first off, the filmmaker asked for feedback of which I gave... If the filmmaker would like me to elaborate on my comment, I would by more than happy to do so, but if someone other than the filmmaker needs to tell me what the movie is about after watching the trailer... "The Trailer" did not do it's job. Is this story a drama-horror-comedy-sci-fi-thriller? Additionally, if this trailer "plays to the senses" then it should at least make sense. And yes I also don't like it when a trailer lays out the whole story for me but least I get the sense that there is a story. Lastly, I firmly stand by what I said but I'll elaborate for those that are unable to understand feedback --This trailer is just a bunch of actors reacting to a question I didn't understand -- it wasn't in english nor was it subtitled. It looked like what Joey on "Friends" would call "SMELL THE FART ACTING" The trailer did not inform my as to the type of story we were about to embark on nor did it inform me as to what the story was about. Tie all these together and it didn't make any sense! Oh and the music doesn't make the story well unless it is a musical. It was loud and distracting. It should be part of the visuals and not fighting for attention. I can go on and on -- but I'm bored with this now.
David, sorry that you felt a need to explain. Your comment seemed straight forward to me. That is the thing about film, as in any other art it touches or not people differently and is made to get a reaction of some sort. Yours was honest and should be taken as such.
thank you for the link to the full film which i enjoyed watching very well shot and very well acted. And does grab you till the end. I look forward to more film by you.
@ Lianne, RA, Beka, Nafisa, Jacqueline, Haqi - Thank you so much for your kind feedback :)
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Hi Carol Ann, my résumé is on my profile ( I think.) I write mainly for TV.
Hi Carol Ann, my résumé is on my profile ( I think.) I write mainly for TV.
Thank you very much Marc, you sound great, but I should have specified I'm looking for someone in LA. That would be ideal. I'm already working with people in HK, Mexico and London over Skype and email...
Expand commentThank you very much Marc, you sound great, but I should have specified I'm looking for someone in LA. That would be ideal. I'm already working with people in HK, Mexico and London over Skype and emails but for this particular project I really want to be able to have face to face meetings. Thanks again. Best...
I just read your bio and I cannot believe that you played in Soap in the City!! I play in that TV show as well!! I'm the cougar:-)) But I actually do have a director, I just need someone with experien...
Expand commentI just read your bio and I cannot believe that you played in Soap in the City!! I play in that TV show as well!! I'm the cougar:-)) But I actually do have a director, I just need someone with experience in writing for TV. My director is always busy shooting somewhere and what I wrote so far needs more structure... but it's not a TV show, drama or comedy, much more an educational program about well being and the awareness of how to live a healthy life.
Thank you Woody, I'll get back to you ASAP.