Dennis Fleming's Lounge Discussions

I try to make it "not" all about me. I spend a lot of my time in my head, at the keyboard, with my characters, writing my first novel. Season's greetings and all other manner of greetings.

I might have introduced myself earlier. Can't remember. Anyway, hello. I'm a writer and currently working on an Indiegogo project titled "Searching for Me: Rediscovering the Self" in which I plan to go into psychiatric consultation twice a week for six months. The book will be about that journey. I'm also writing a screenplay about a woman deputy who must interrogate a serial killer who is her ex boyfriend (high school) and father of her daughter.

Been working on writing some screen plays and have two in 2nd draft status. I go over them and try and see if I made any mistakes but sometimes I feel like sometimes my dialogue might be the problem. I posted my scripts to Amazon Studios but you don't get much feedback there from the site or people on the site. So figured I would try to see what tips anyone has for writing dialogue.

I'm Dennis. I'm working on a book the writing of which I hope to fund through Indiegogo. Need $15990. I'm also writing a screenplay based on my book, The Girl Who Had No Enemies. I'm fictionalizing characters based on some in the book. I love screenwriting more than any other form, but it's hard to keep working on a script because the chance of selling it, if you don't know someone, is like Lotto gambling. My agent is a literary agent and doesn't handle scripts unless there is an offer to option the book. Hope to meet people here who love writing, producing, acting, directing....such a great business.