Brian K. Millard's Lounge Discussions

Craig D Griffiths
Hinting at a shot.

When describing a room you can hint at the shots.

A large library. A man sits at a table. He is staring at a picture in a book.

A man stares at a picture in a book. He is sitting at a table in a large library.

These are poorly written examples. Do you have examples of this we should read? Any good scripts?

Christopher Phillips

Craig D Griffiths Don't forget that what we see on the movie screen isn't necessarily what was written. Some libraries have guards, many don't. Not all have balconies. So, you have to write the "flavo...

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Craig D Griffiths

Christopher Phillips When I wrote Hostage it was set in a closed Irish Bar in Boston. They going to shoot it in an abandon mechanic workshop in New Jersey.

Smashing a bottle into his knee become smashi...

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John Iannucci

Movies are a visual medium - the library should be mentioned first

Craig D Griffiths

Dan MaxXx thank you. You can pick every single shot from that page. Close in on the alarm clock and the fact that we never see the person but learn so much about them.

This is also proof. That if you are good, nothing else matters.

Brian K. Millard

John, I think the point of the post's examples is to illustrate that if you mention the library first you're suggesting an establishing shot, but if you mention the page in the book first you're hinti...

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Mandy Goldstein
LOS ANGELES/HOLLYWOOD Meet Up/Event SUNDAY February 15

Los Angeles Meet-Up on Sunday February 15 / 5:00 PM Screening followed by Meet-Up/Networking Mixer COME SEE WHAT OUR STAGE 32 MEMBERS CAN DO WITH A LITTLE HEART AND DETERMINATION - WHILE NETWORKING WITH EACH OTHER. ____________________ ARENA CINEMA HOLLYWOOD - SCREENING START TIME 5:00 PM 1625 N. La...

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Dallas James

Just got email confirmation that my very own personal copy of CUT! is on its way and will be hand delivered to my front door within days! I can't wait to see it on the giant 4K!

David Banks

Woohoo! Can't wait to see what you think Dallas!

David Rountree

That is terrific Dallas!

Antonio Carrasco

So bummed I missed this one!!!

Dallas James

Loved it! Excellent direction and awesomely acted. Thanks for shooting this in the style that you did. I truly appreciate the thriller aspects and the restraint from turning the piece into gore. P.S....

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Mandy Goldstein
Los Angeles (Burbank)

(UPDATE 9-15-14) - We will be meeting on the outdoor patio at PF Changs in Burbank (address listed below) from 5-6:45. Happy hour is 5-6. The movie will begin at 7:05 but we will be able to take red carpet pictures outside the theater (you can use for IMDb or Stage32). This event will be a GREAT NET...

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Amanda Nevarez

Really? Send me details please!

Serita Stevens

Write to joey@stage32.com and get your name on rap list

Amanda Nevarez

I had a great time last night! Wish i would have met more of you! Thanks for letting me know about this.

Robert Sherry

Hi Amanda! I'm glad you had such a great time! Yeah, there were probably a few hundred people there, and I definitely didn't get to meet everyone which includes you. :-( Maybe next time, or maybe we c...

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