Hey all,
I recently finished a short film script and was looking to get feedback. I would love to do a trade, I'll read yours if you read mine?
Here's the logline:
To gain a following on social media, a self-obsessed young man undergoes plastic surgery to look like a popular filter that deforms your face.
Questions instantly spring to mind. His face could have been changed by VFX instead of the knife and there are outlets to buy instant fan bases on social media now. So I'm presuming he's so self obses...
Expand commentQuestions instantly spring to mind. His face could have been changed by VFX instead of the knife and there are outlets to buy instant fan bases on social media now. So I'm presuming he's so self obsessed he is his own worst saboteur, a kind of script where the nemesis is the self. I can't advise on log line until know the story. Sounds intriguing!
Sure, send it to roosterhoff@outlook.com
@Barry I’m travelling and only have i phone to log on here and blue links with threads do not synchronise, hence can’t read script.
If you get a moment, I would suggest leaving feedback on the loglines of others and you can end it with a request and a link to your logline. Here's where you can search loglines: https://www.stage32....
Expand commentIf you get a moment, I would suggest leaving feedback on the loglines of others and you can end it with a request and a link to your logline. Here's where you can search loglines: https://www.stage32.com/loglines