Hey everybody,
I've been working on a few TV show pitches / Show bibles and I really need some feedback. If you are interested message me.
Thank you.
Lisa Geis's Lounge Discussions
Question.
What is the best way to find someone that can turn your short script into a short film? Would it be smart to just post in the Filmmaking lounge to find someone?
i have the same problem, have a screenplay for a short movie, it is 31 pages long, but i live in Romania, and i want my movie to be done in America if possible, so i have no idea what sold i do :)
Lonel, does it have to be done in America? Also, does it have to be 31 pages, can it be slimmed down?
Ionel Movila
- 5 years ago
well when i write the sceenplay i made it like the things happend in America, but if needed i think we can change that, and to slimmed down not sure what to say about it, if needed i guess it may be possible to try
Iannis Aliferis
- 5 years ago
I mention this for 2 reasons: a) So you have chance to make it yourself - in Romania. The shorter it is, the less it has in it, the easier to do yourself. b) For festivals and competitions, usually th...
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can we please talk on the chat Sir ? i believe there are a few thing that i yet do not know, i wold love to do it myself but first i thing that there are things that i still need to find out for myself somehow
Are there any tricks when it comes to writing loglines?
Are there any tricks when it comes to writing loglines? Are there things you would consider unprofessional? I've been working on one logline and can't seem to figure out if it's good or not.
Logline: A spiritually confused girl who suffers from pyromania wants to let go of her past mistakes while one...
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Karen Stark
- 6 years ago
Yes there are.
Inciting Incident + Protagonist + Action + Antagonist.
https://s.studiobinder.com/wp-content/uploads/2018/09/How-to-Write-a-Com......
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Jason Mirch
- 6 years ago
Hey Lisa, great to have you here! Did you know that Stage 32 Script Services offers a service where a Development Executive actually writes a logline for you? If you are having trouble this might be a...
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Jack Binder
- 6 years ago
Great tips. Loglines are critical to get right, constantly improve and update!
Hi Lisa. As I have done for a few folks on here, I can send you a Logline Helpsheet I put together for my clients and Philmscribers some time ago. Message me - and of course anyone who's interested - if you'd like me to email.
I hate writing . Like I loathe doing it with every fibre of my being. Having said that; I have found over the years that the LA Screenwriter logline feedback and contests they would run to be very helpful.
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