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Colin R. Mah
Hello, looking for Chinese or Asian writers versed in culture and history

Hello folks, I am currently writing a ww2 dramedy similar to Jo-Jo Rabbit and based on my family's history in 1937  pre communist China. I am and always are hoping to connect with some like minded writers to Collab. Get at me if interested!

Opening - In 1937 the Japanese Imperial army played a game o...

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Colin R. Mah

It is suppose to be a play on words but yes I can definitely edit that out. I was basically looking to set a tone of absurdness right off the beginning. A dramedy because of the effective correlation...

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Colin R. Mah

I suppose the proper terminology would be a satire of war

Mike Boas

My problem with the sentence is I literally don’t understand what’s happening. So the word repetition could be funny, but we’d have to be clear on the plot you’re trying to convey first.

Mark Deuce

This looks amazing Colin R. Mah

Colin R. Mah

Thanks brother!

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