There really isn't much to tell about me. I had a pitch for a TV pilot on ABC that never got picked up, so I made it into a web series. This is the third episode of the series. We plan on making 13 of these, all 22 minutes long, over the next four years........yes, four years. Time, I've got, but mo...
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I find more people call them self screenwriters without any qualifications. I am curious what would qualify some of these people as screenwriters. I didn't start calling myself a screenwriter until I won my first award and writing for a few professional groups in LA. What's your story?
We cannot survive by our script writing so we choose a rich husband or lover,we work in another profession from 8 to 4,we know that writing is a drug as you said Laurence so beautifully and we pray th...
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While I'm waiting for my brilliance to be discovered I unload trucks. Most people would have given up by now, but quitting would empty my life.
Rich lover? Where do I sign up for that program?
No chance I have already a rich husband and could not decently write and have such active sexual life.I am also 73 and feel quite old at this time of my life. I have missed you dear.sorry.
Philip: I have not seen the Milius documentary on Netflix. I haven't seen anything on Netflix. Don't have an account. But I will attempt to search it out and take a look. John was (and is) one of a kind.
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I like the writing. I like the jokes. I like the characters, The acting is okay. I think you need to improve on the directing. Add some more movement during the dialog. Your actors shouldn't be just s...
Expand commentI like the writing. I like the jokes. I like the characters, The acting is okay. I think you need to improve on the directing. Add some more movement during the dialog. Your actors shouldn't be just standing there and talking. Change the lighting and camera angles during the scenes that are supposed to be scary. I don't mean to be critical I really like it.
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Good luck James! We've been working on our web series on and off for 2+ years. It's a process...
Thank you all for the kind words. And I never take notes as critical or as attacks. Just notes. Yeah, I don't like a lot movement in my shots, I think it's done too much these days.
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I found it a fun watch!
Aw thanks.