When her sandal slips off and disappears into the muddy ground, Watermelon accidentally sinks deeper, unable to escape. Carrot – the only friend still safe – must quickly find a way to rescue her before it’s too late.
Animation : [Feedback Needed] Teaser for my kids’ animation script :The Basket of Friendship Shells by Thiên Thư
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The Basket of Friendship Shells sounds interesting from the teaser, Thiên Thư. Is it just Watermelon and Carrot in the story, or are there other friends (a group of fruit and vegetable friends)?
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Yes, there are also a few supporting characters — like Teacher Strawberry and Uncle Pumpkin.
I like the names, Thiên Thư. Is this a movie or TV series?
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ITS short animated film for children. It’s a stand-alone story, about 15–20 minutes long.
Did you finish writing the script, Thiên Thư?
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Kids should love it. Best of luck!
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This sounds interesting, like a childhood imaginary adventure game, which I remember playing for hours on end in the woods, but one questions... could there be a hint of what is in this underground mud world? Is it a separate fanstasy world?
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Maurice Vaughan I've finished writing this script, but I'm still wondering if it's actually good. Does it meet the expectations?
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THANK YOU MR.BILL MCCORMICK
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@MICHAEL Actually, there isn’t a world under the mud. That other world exists in a completely different script, THANK YOU MR.DZURAK
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Congratulations on finishing the script, Thiên Thư! Stage 32 has feedback services (www.stage32.com/scriptservices).
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I’m curious about the first sentence in your log line. Whar is the significance of the sandal? Also, I’m not sure what the conflict is.
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THANK YOU, MR MAURICE
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Desiree Middleton Actually, it’s not really a conflict, but a mishap. And the story is about children’s friendship—how a true friend doesn’t leave you when you're in trouble.
You're welcome, Thiên Thư.
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Like it! Consider deleting "accidentally" and "– the only friend still safe –".
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I would enjoy hearing more about your project.
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This looks cute. Is this your artwork?