Hi fellow writers; I have a pilot in the sci fi genre for an anthology series. I'm a long-time sci fi writer but even so, we all make mistakes, right? So, I'd like to swap with someone. I'll read yours and you read mine. Ideally, please, be comfortable with a professional critique and not just personal opinions. I hope that's okay to say. I look forward to hearing from you.
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People swap with Ilanna Mandel ! She's a great writer and gives amazing notes :)
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Awww thanks
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Hello sweetheart!! I unfortunately don't have a completed script or full story, BUT I have TONS of experience within the entertainment industry, been a child actor and worked side by side with some of Hollywoods leading actors, directors and creatives!!! When I was a 10-11 year old child I was blazing a path of screenwriting aiming at being the record holder of the "YOUNGEST SCREENWRITER IN HOLLYWOOD!" I had a working in Hollywood industry screenwriter (the writer of a film I made at that age) at my disposal and in my back pocket!! He was so supportive and so incredibly helpful to me during this time and his tutelage was incomparable. I finished my hand written screenplay (500 pages of handwritten screenplay - at 11 I did not have a computer to type it out - I am 43 years old now!) but by the time I completed my screenplay Nikki Reed with the help of her close friend and established Director Catherine Hardwicke made Nikki Reed and Evan Rachel Wood made the coming of age film Thirteen and Nikki made history!! Kudos to them for sure!! That film is AMAZING but I have lots of knowledge you may say I'm a conundrum of knowledge stemming all the way back to me aged 5 years working on Cheers!! I would LOVE to read your story and give feedback, if in return you may listen to an idea I've had brewing in my mind over the last 6 months that just needs to come out!! I gave up my writing when I became a single mama of my 3 children all under the age of 5! I had no help with them at all which meant everything that I wanted for myself went out the door so I was there for my babies!! Today, my children are all grown now 18-21 years old, and my last one moved out of our home 2 months ago; SO NOW it's my time!! though I'm still a little gun shy with doing for myself because I've dedicated my entire life to raising my babies the best way I could for them, it's MY TURN and my passion and passionate love affair for writing is far more prominent than ever before!!! Writing has always been an outlet for me on a therapeutic level, I even during their upbringing created a YA story (in novel form) that I have about 43 pages written, BUT this story in my head NEEDS to be the focal point and I simply need compassion, strength, and a bit more motivation and direction to make this empty nester mama become once again a passionate writer even if it is simply just for my therapy sessions lol Much love girly!! ❤️
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Hi, I have experience with YA and MG writing. I cannot, at this time look at a 500 page script, but I can look at a script for 90 min. screen time if that helps.