Don't overdo your dialogue. Bear in mind when you're writing a film script, the onus should be on the visuals, the action. It's a visual medium. Or as Bruce Lee puts it:
After leaving her abusive husband, Brooke is finally settled and happy with the way her life is going. she has the opportunity to start over, but while out f...
This is a live readout of the first chapter of my 3-part literary magnum opus, "Icon of the Defender", intended to showcase my potential narrative skills.
Don't overdo your dialogue. Bear in mind when you're writing a film script, the onus should be on the visuals, the action. It's a visual medium. Or as Bruce Lee puts it: