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SYNOPSIS:
LLOYD BRANDON JR. is just a freshman in high school, but he's already replacing his father, LLOYD SR. as the pastor at their church. His mother OLEETA is proud, but older sister MARVEIL is more embarrassed, especially when Lloyd announces his plan to preach at his school. On the first day at school, Lloyd and his friend JACOB already have a run-in with TERRIBLE T and his gang, who pretty much run the school. Even the teachers are afraid. Lloyd decides he will have to do something about it. Lloyd begins inspiring his own classmates, inviting them to his church and his faith club. Even his teacher, MRS. LAVENDER, is impressed. Terrible T and his gang have their sights on Lloyd and send a message by attacking him. His family searches for him. meanwhile, Terrible T's cousin RIO helps Lloyd escape. Lloyd is taken to the hospital just in time. He is shaken up, but he still delivers a rousing sermon at the church, to bring the entire community together. Terrible T continues to harass Lloyd but his faith remains strong. Lloyd introduces Rio to the fellow members of his faith club. Rio tells them about Terrible T's painful childhood. Lloyd decides to invite Terrible T and his gang to church. Backed by his faith club members, he asks Terrible T to meet him at church to settle their dispute once and for all. Jacob and the others try to stop him, but Lloyd convinces them he knows what he's doing Lloyd expresses his wish to help Terrible T, but Terrible T becomes angry and pulls a gun on Lloyd. Lloyd refuses to back down. Members of the faith club as well as members of the church line beside Lloyd. Terrible T hesitates to pull the trigger. His fellow gang members also decides to line with Lloyd. Terrible T drops to his knees, ready to welcome Christ in his life.
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What an interesting read. Have you completed the script?
Yes, but I am trying to get my first script (The Tale of Denzel and Isabella above) through the happy writers first. But that is definitely the next one. Thank you very much, Eric.
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Wow great ideas.
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What a great story of faith, perseverance, forgiveness and redemption. My kind of story, brother. Thanks for writing it, Antonio.
Thank you, Jorge. It is very dear to me. The area I went to High school was heavily influenced by gang violence. And when I was a teenager, I was heavily involved in the church being ushering other things. They would always call me a preacher and I did not see because I am a bit on the edgy side to be that person. And along with the gang violence going on in time today, I just put those three together and wrote this. But thank you very much.