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Recent high school graduate Michael seeks a girlfriend and gets a job at a downtrodden discount store, K-Shop. David, an embittered cashier, decides to get fired from K-Shop by saying whatever he wants to customers, managers, and coworkers. A visit by the overpaid company CEO and celebrity spokesperson will decide the fate of the struggling store.
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I can see where it's a fun premise with many comedic opportunities. You may want to consider shortening your logline.
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