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After accepting a job as a lighthousekeeper/tour guide a Viet Nam War widow finds herself in the middle of a smuggling ring.
SYNOPSIS:
Our leading lady Joan arrives early to start her new job. She is the new person in town, living on a remote island. She knows no one, she has no boat, she knows she can't trust anyone but has to find the person who is trying to kill her. This small town in America's Heartland is full of secerts and people who are not who we think they are. After 2 murders, she finds her not so dead husband has been there all along watching over her. Where has he been for almost 40 years, why did he leave her and can she forgive him?
Hey Ruby, Welcome Back !!! Had a quite look and really think you need to create a PDF and not a .Doc file. Also your SLUGS and Formatting does need work and I would recommend getting screenwriting software to begin with. I guess it is not always an easy journey coming back to writing so I take my hat of to you and hope you persist. Good Luck.