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KDAN
By Lawrence Gleadhill
Kdan has the fate of the world resting on his shoulders. His twin sister is set to bring about a plague of death and destruction, but Kdan is not alone. Vampires, Wizards, Animen and the Auri all have their role in Kdan's Quest.
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I'm no expert but it appears that your scripts formatting is wrong. There is too much blank spaces. Also Character dialogue's spacing is wrong (going to the end of the line). One thing you need to do before sending the script anywhere is make sure it's formatted correctly. You don't want to give the readers or producers a reason not to read your script.