Compelling story, great actors, nice locations (U got to love the UK) agree excellent production, what did you film this on? What are you doing with it distribution wise?
Thanks very much Jak. This was filmed on Canon 5D MarkII and I'm not doing anything regarding distribution apart from putting it online. Would you suggest anything?
Try festivals for sure. Put it on Blip TV and add advertising so you monetize it. Use it to build a following for your work. Use it as your biz card. Like the quality of the short. It's really well filmed. Good luck matey!
I'll try Blip TV, thanks for the tip. I'm not sure if festival programmers like that kind of films... Anyway, thanks very much and all the best. Marcello
Wow. I really liked that. It had some great camera angles, and it really seemed to keep me interested. The acting was very good, and the story, and message were both very effective. Good job, man.
Rule of Threes. Composition could be better! Never center. Lead your viewers. More space in composition in the direction your actor is looking. Pace it a tad faster. Show me more. But, over all... NOT BAD. We all have room for improvement. Life is learning.
@John Harman I'm not advocating drug use @ Don Patterson This is my 1st short film and it's a student film that was shot in a weekend, so yeah lots of room for improvement. But I don't agree with your comments about composition though. Thanks for the comments!
Thanks very much mate.
Compelling story, great actors, nice locations (U got to love the UK) agree excellent production, what did you film this on? What are you doing with it distribution wise?
Thanks very much Jak. This was filmed on Canon 5D MarkII and I'm not doing anything regarding distribution apart from putting it online. Would you suggest anything?
Try festivals for sure. Put it on Blip TV and add advertising so you monetize it. Use it to build a following for your work. Use it as your biz card. Like the quality of the short. It's really well filmed. Good luck matey!
Aim everything (including festivals in the US). I'm a Brit now living in NYC. Here is where people need to see it.
I'll try Blip TV, thanks for the tip. I'm not sure if festival programmers like that kind of films... Anyway, thanks very much and all the best. Marcello
But isn't Blip for web series? I mean mine is a short film...
It is used that way but you can also upload shorts I think perhaps with some supplementary material. Check it out see if you can use it as a platform.
Wow. I really liked that. It had some great camera angles, and it really seemed to keep me interested. The acting was very good, and the story, and message were both very effective. Good job, man.
1-10 Camera work 5 Message 2 Acting 5 DON'T DO DRUGS - JUST SAY "NO"
Thanks very much Garon!
Hey, you earned it.
Rule of Threes. Composition could be better! Never center. Lead your viewers. More space in composition in the direction your actor is looking. Pace it a tad faster. Show me more. But, over all... NOT BAD. We all have room for improvement. Life is learning.
@John Harman I'm not advocating drug use @ Don Patterson This is my 1st short film and it's a student film that was shot in a weekend, so yeah lots of room for improvement. But I don't agree with your comments about composition though. Thanks for the comments!