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RABID DEATH
By Donte Burks
When a super-strain of rabies infects a community, a trapped family fights to survive the onslaught of infected animals and humans. Water becomes their weapon.
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Sounds like a thrilling script, Donte Burks. Is there an adjective you can give the family? I would change "must fight" to "fights." I would also change the end to "infected animals and humans."
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thanks for the feedback, Maurice.
You're welcome, Donte Burks.
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