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LAST SEEN IN CHILLTOWN
By Jamie Freiburghouse
Ten years after her cousin vanished, a woman working in a small-town thrift shop discovers she can relive memories embedded in donated clothing—and becomes the only witness to the truth behind another missing girl.
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Really unique concept, Jamie Freiburghouse! "she can relive memories embedded in donated clothing" hooked me. I can't wait to watch this! Love the title!
I think you're close to a solid logline. I suggest giving the woman an adjective (the main flaw she has to overcome in the script or an adjective that describes her personality). It'll give the reader more insight into the woman's character. I suggest adding her goal in the story too.