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Alex Lang
Do any of these 7 loglines grab you?

Hi everyone!

I am getting ready to start my next pilot script, and I've narrowed it down to these 7 ideas.

Do any of them make you want to read?

1. A rock star joins a secret government agency that fights demonic possession.

2. A poor student deals drugs to both sides in a local Antifa/Nazi war for tui...

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Lori Wilde

My main question on all the loglines is "why". Add the motivation.

Angel Luis Martinez Jr.

maybe we need to motivate the audience to watch. Intriguing, interesting stories.

Christiane Lange
4, and I like the law school in the logline.
Tim Bragg

Number 6, that could be a fun idea, it could be a spin on Tremors.

J.M. Gulmire
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