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When an egocentric bestselling author is accused of killing his wife and local law labels him Suspect #1, he digs up dirty secrets of a small-town sheriff to prove his innocence and expose corruption in a picture-perfect town.
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Will Henan has had one hell of a life, striking gold with bestseller after bestseller and bringing home the bacon to his drop-dead gorgeous wife, Amy. But, when Amy is killed in their own home during an alleged robbery, his picture-perfect life is suddenly ripped out of his hands and into the headlines in an apparent smear campaign. For the sake of closure and for the sake of his future, Will must find the murders, yet, as the dots connect, the string of shocking revelations reel him into an underground world of crime, deception, and payoffs in a conspiracy that is nothing like his neatly wrapped novels.
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I think you almost have a great logline, Kevin Enners. I think you just need to add more info at the end. "When an egocentric bestselling author is accused of killing his wife and local law labels him Suspect #1, he digs up dirty secrets of a small-town sheriff to _____________ (blackmail the sheriff so the sheriff will clear his name?)."
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Like it Kevin Enners i think you really nailed it on this one!
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