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A young Prince has been trained since childhood to defend his land against the Dark Emperor's forces but the magic in the ancient legends, an ill-timed romance with a strong-willed Princess, and the might of the enemy make the task seem overwhelming ...while, behind the scenes, other players are manipulating events for even higher stakes.
SYNOPSIS:
The Ancient Legends decreed that the second born prince
of Arrindare should, on his eighteenth birthday, become
the Warlord of the seven armies of Amorand.
As Prince Gwaine’s eighteenth birthday approached,
so did the war.
Century after century had seen the Dark Emperor’s forces
pour over the northern borders of Amorand and move closer
to victory with each assault.
The Warlord’s grizzled old tutor, Magnor, had schooled
Gwaine since early childhood in all of the skills of war but
he knew that this test was more difficult than any test faced
by the long line of Warlords before him.
This time, all that would stand in the way of the
Dark Emperor’s victory were the fragments of legends
passed down through the eons, the Fortress of Marsh,
and Gwaine.
This was the worst possible time for Gwaine to
meet his Princess.
Despite their rank, Gwaine and Tanya were just
two young people who had grown up in the shadow of war.
The shadow was now reality.
After it all, what would be left?
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When a young Prince comes up against the Dark Emperor's forces, he encounters the magic of the ancient legends, an ill-timed romance with a strong-willed Princess and the strong might of the enemy, while other players too manipulate events to create even higher stakes.