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GUS
By Francisco Castro

GENRE: Drama, Comedy
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Once best friends in high school, GUS, PAULIE, and JIMMY, all in their 60s now, set out to reclaim their youth only to discover their lives.

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Tasha McLemore

This sounds like a great concept, but I would remove the names and add to "the discover their lives" part. You have your protag (the three friends. But was is the inciting incident? Who or what is the antag? Central conflict? The goal is to reclaim their youth, but what will stand in their way of finding it?

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