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THE SPLINTER
By Francisco Castro
After inheriting land left to her by her estranged father, a struggling young Navajo woman uncovers the century-old curse that took her father's life and now wants her.
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Catchy title, Francisco Castro. I think your logline needs more information. Right now, the logline is just the set up. The logline doesn't mention the story goal and stakes.