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FORGIVING RETRIBUTION

FORGIVING RETRIBUTION
By Curt Samlaska

GENRE: Drama
LOGLINE:

A remorseful doctor refuses treatment for a potentially terminal illness, believing it is retribution for the death of a teenager under his care. Haunted by the ghost of the teenager, he is reminded of the good he has done by an old patient, which convinces him to reconsider (10 pages).

SYNOPSIS:

Opening scene (Act 1): Heavy breathing. It's very dark and there is a burning car in the background. POV injured passenger hears muffled voice: "I got you." The injured man's vision clears, focusing on a 40-year-old man..."I got you. I'm Dr. Brona. I've got you. You're gonna be okay." Arthur (45-year-old black male) wakes from his nightmare, startling his wife. He tells her "I've got to find him. I can't get him out of my head."

(Act 2) Dr. Brona is now 65-years-old and is in a dermatology clinic. He is informed that he has an aggressive melanoma. He is haunted by the ghost of a teenager that died of pericarditis and myocarditis. He blames himself for missing the diagnosis. The teenager appears frequently, staring at him with a blank, accusing gaze. He denies further evaluation and treatment, believing that his misfortunes are retribution.

(Act 3) Arthur has been looking for Dr. Brona for many years, having only his last name to go on. It was a difficult charge. He shows up at Dr. Brona's house and realizes that he has finally found the man who saved his life. Unknowingly, it is now up to Arthur to save Dr. Brona.

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Marcel Nault Jr.

Very suspenseful. One hell of a thrill ride!

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