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Everything seems perfect in Vacation World, until a 13-year-old girl arrives whose anxiety manifests as awe-inspiring visions of natural disasters.
SYNOPSIS:
Vacation World is a disaster drama series exploring themes of fate, fear, and friendship.
In 2086 the world is riddled with natural disasters and teetering on the edge of collapse. 'Vacation World' is an ethereal and world-renowned vacation park untouched by this destruction. Everything seems perfect in Vacation World, until a 13-year-old girl arrives whose anxiety manifests as awe-inspiring visions of more natural disasters. Another young environmentalist believes these visions are prophecy communicated directly by Mother Nature. Together, these two teens must convince the nihilist adults in the park to act before the people there, and potentially in the rest of the world, are wiped out.
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Hi Lauren, this is a cool idea. I think you could make your logline stronger by including the second young teen who helps the girl. That would help show the themes of the story better.
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Molly Peck that's a great idea! I will note that for my rewrites. Thank you.