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DIFFERENCE
By Brooke EM

GENRE: Sci-fi, Action
LOGLINE:

 Two young men who despise living with each other; try to escape from each other; only to fall into another universe. But they get trapped in another universe?

SYNOPSIS:

Two young men who despise living with each other; try to escape from each other; only to fall into another universe. But they get trapped in another universe?

DIFFERENCE

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Tasha Lewis

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Maurice Vaughan

This sounds like an exciting Sci-Fi Action show, Brooke EM. I think your logline needs some work though.

Here's a logline suggestion: "When two young roommates who can't stand each other ____________ (the inciting incident), they fall into another universe. Trapped, they work together to find a way back home (?????)."

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