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Two young men who despise living with each other; try to escape from each other; only to fall into another universe. But they get trapped in another universe?
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Two young men who despise living with each other; try to escape from each other; only to fall into another universe. But they get trapped in another universe?
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This sounds like an exciting Sci-Fi Action show, Brooke EM. I think your logline needs some work though.
Here's a logline suggestion: "When two young roommates who can't stand each other ____________ (the inciting incident), they fall into another universe. Trapped, they work together to find a way back home (?????)."