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MISS HE
By Brooke EM
GEMMA can alternate her appearance from male to female; looking both glamorous. As Julian; she is handsome. But a real man named NICK wants to date her.. will he find the truth on her altering ability???
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GEMMA can alternate her appearance from male to female; looking both glamorous. As Julian; she is handsome. But a real man named NICK wants to date her.. will he find the truth on her altering ability???
MISS HE
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Hi Brooke, Checked out your screenplay. I would download a free screenwriting program and buy The Hollywood Standard. Those two things will help a lot. Cheers, Rutger
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There are too many elements here on your logline. Shorten it. Don't say too much about your main protagonist. Find a way to make her dual identities more subtle.
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