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WITHOUT FAIL: A MAN’S GUIDE TO A WOMAN’S HEART.

WITHOUT FAIL: A MAN’S GUIDE TO A WOMAN’S HEART.
By Norman L.Kgatla

GENRE: Romance, Comedy
LOGLINE:

A degenerate author, who’s versatile at everything apart from love, writes a bestseller that ultimately makes him the most hated individual since Adolf Hitler.

SYNOPSIS:

Without fail is a romantic comedy about a degenerate, multi-talented author, columnist, game show winner, a radio & TV personality, who’s a hopeless romantic; that decides to write a handbook in order to help men understand women’s mind games after he is left at the altar by the woman of his dreams.

The book becomes a global bestseller, but it paints a huge target on his back, as he’s forced to deal with critics, women’s advocacy groups, prominent figures in media & politics that tarnish his image on all major news cycles & social media platforms, criticizing his book for being a toxic tirade of a sad & lonely; sexist white man on the verge of a breakdown.

But this propels the book even further as it becomes more popular across the world, which eventually puts his life at risk, as he faces public harassment, death threats, assaults and his family turning on him.

Without fail is a tale about love, romance, happiness, sex, power, betrayal, deception, manipulation, desperation, obsession, human weakness, toxic masculinity, courage, resurgence and redemption.

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Sonny Traylor

The logline is both concise and compelling. I would consider one minor revision - changing it to read, "A degenerate author, who’s skilled at everything apart from love..." "Versatile" certainly works well enough, but the extra syllables make the clause drag unnecessarily.

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