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A daughter rebels against everything her religious, conservative mother instilled in her on this tumultuous, cutting-edge, true-story, 1966-2004 journey to fulfill her desire to become a mother herself. Think JANE THE VIRGIN on a THELMA & LOUISE road trip for a divided USA in 2023.
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Here are the 2023 Nicholl Reader Comments on my first feature, drama screenplay based on my true story, Left-hand Turns: Driving Lessons For The Not Faint Of Heart:
1st 2023 Nicholl's Reader: "...delightlfully different...a fresh voice...took on complexities of being a woman born between conflicting generations...much of dialogue was fabulous--poetic and pithy. Organic and original. ...an amazing job of coming up with fantasy sequences that helped express externally the internal feelings of the lead, Rhonda."
2nd 2023 Nicholl's Reader: "...a lovely screenplay. ...fraught with tension...able to breathe new life into this sub-genre...Character work is often stunning. ...-This is GREAT writing. Just beautiful...- Visuals are nothing short of stunning. ...this is a bold script that demands to be noticed."
3rd 2023 Nicholl's Reader: "...anyone might find the theme of women choosing what to do with their bodies and lives somewhat interesting."
4th 2023 Nicholl's Reader: "...nice realism at play...dialogue is solid...good feel for character throughout."
5th 2023 Nicholl's Reader: "...tells an intriguing story...a strong and engaging narrative voice...the premise has a lot of potential."
6th 2023 Nicholl's Reader: "The premise...was interesting, ...a relatable protagonist...a quiet authenticity to the script..."
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