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UMBER & CROMANTICA
By Cristiana Bartolini
SYNOPSIS:
Two cities collide in this urban fantasy: a dark and mysterious future metropolis and its colorful virtual counterpart, a whimsical world where life becomes an irresistible animated game. But behind this fairy tale lies a metaphor for the loneliness of adolescence and the dangers of computer addiction. The novel follows the quest of a young girl, smitten with her charismatic leader, and her friends, who brave online battles, real rivalries and hidden intrigues to find a way out of their imprisonment, They must face the ultimate challenge: accepting reality as it is. For freedom is priceless, and it comes at a high cost. In the end, the twin worlds will crumble into each other, in a cataclysmic finale that will reveal what lies beyond.
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No "raisins". The logline is dry and does not moisturize the reader's thoughts. For example, the movie "Alien" 1979
A team of space truckers receives a signal from an unknown planet, according to the protocol, it is necessary to investigate the source of the signal, but during the study of the signal, one of the crew members becomes infected by an unknown life form. Infection of a crew member is only the beginning of the development of an alien organism. There must be material that develops into something big. Please forgive me for the harsh criticism.
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