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THE HAG STONE
By Mark Deuce
When awkward teen outcast Rudy Ronald discovers a cursed hag stone that reveals a hidden world of seductive sirens and deadly mermaids, he must navigate temptation, betrayal, and ancient curses to prevent an underwater apocalypse—while dealing with high school bullies and his own insecurities.
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One eye on reality, the other on the abyss—what you see might drown you.
In a world where ancient myths collide with modern teen life, a cursed hag stone—imbued with the power to reveal hidden realms of sirens and mermaids—resurfaces after centuries. The series follows Rudy Ronald, a awkward high school outcast, as he discovers the stone and unwittingly becomes entangled in an underwater war between seductive sirens and vengeful sea creatures. Blending historical flashbacks with contemporary chaos, the show explores themes of identity, power, temptation, and the blurred line between hero and fool.
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Thanks Marcos Fizzotti for the perfect rating.
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While dealing with high school bullies, an awkward teenager discovers a damned Hag Stone that reveals a hidden world filled with tempting, seductive sirens and deadly mermaids, forcing him to confront ancient curses to prevent an underwater apocalypse.
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Mark, help me with mine: A cynical college professor who debunks supernatural claims must abandon a lifetime of beliefs to defeat the spirits of the Hawaiian Underworld or be slain during tonight’s 27th Phase of the Moon.
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A skeptical college professor, renowned for debunking supernatural hoaxes, must confront and overcome the vengeful spirits of the Hawaiian Underworld by embracing the very myths he's dismissed, or face eternal damnation under the ominous 27th Phase of the Moon.
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Dr. Elias Thorne, a sharp-tongued anthropology professor at a prestigious university, has built his career on exposing frauds and pseudoscience, particularly ancient folklore and ghost stories. His latest target is Hawaiian mythology, which he ridicules in a viral lecture series. But when he travels to Hawaii for a debunking expedition, strange occurrences begin: whispers in the wind, shadowy figures in the night, and a cryptic warning from a local kahuna about the impending "27th Phase of the Moon"—a rare celestial event said to thin the veil between the living world and Po, the Hawaiian Underworld.As the moon waxes to its fateful phase that very night, Elias is pulled into a nightmarish reality where the spirits of ancient warriors, gods, and betrayed souls rise to claim him as retribution for his disbelief. Haunted by visions of his own tragic past—perhaps the loss of a loved one he rationalized away—Elias must ally with a skeptical local guide and delve into forbidden rituals, sacred sites like the volcanic craters of Haleakalā, and forgotten chants to outwit the malevolent entities. Racing against the clock, he grapples with abandoning his rational worldview to wield the power of aloha and ancestral magic, or risk being dragged into the abyss forever. In this thrilling blend of horror and cultural redemption, Elias learns that some truths defy logic, and survival demands faith in the unseen.
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