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A young aspiring author trying to bring her dysfunctional family together to form a family business.
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Ne’ Chell Miller is what you can call an average girl with a vision. But the vision she has isn’t just a vision for herself. Ne’ Chell has an idea for her entire family! Ne’ Chell writes books when she’s not distracted, trying to figure out multiple income streams. She’s always in deep thought; it’s all the time, so she rarely writes because she gets too distracted, so easy to focus on herself. Ne’ Chell is very family-oriented and loves to be with her family, so she figured she’d come up with a way to be with her family and make money at the same time. Most of them didn’t want a regular nine-to-five. Knowing how her family likes to party and act up, she knew what they needed to do. Mobile Detailing would be the business choice, seeing they have a vast family and combining that with selling dinners.
Ne’ Chell soon comes to a realization dealing with her family; that is trying to combine family and business, she may be biting off more than she can chew when it comes to her and her Dysfunctional Family.
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