Wow, I appreciate the rating

No problem, Wondy Clavien. I'd watch this show. Did you already write the pilot?

Hey, Wondy Clavien. After reading your logline again, I noticed an issue with it. I think you should add his goal. Something like "When a rebellious and gauntly teenager leaves his mother's home to _____________ (his goal), he spirals down a world of petty crime, disloyal friends, and an unrelenting police officer on his tail."

Or: "When a rebellious and gauntly teenager leaves home to _____________ (his goal), he spirals down a world of petty crime, disloyal friends, and an unrelenting police officer on his tail."

Maurice Vaughan Good point!

Maurice Vaughan Thanks for the advice. I'm still working on the script.

You're welcome, Wondy Clavien. I understand. Keep us updated on the script.