Post your loglines. Get and give feedback.
SERIES TITLE : THOMAS
Episode Title : What A Man's Gotta do
Thomas (VO): It's been a few days since i got on Paige's nerves and She already knows I'm different then most men , I can't help the fact that i like intimacy , nothing wrong with that.
SCENE 1 INT
MORNING
HOME 8 AM
Thomas : Hey Ma, I am so glad That Charlotte No Longer Bothers The Hell Out Of Me,
She's a little wimp compared to me however doesn't mean she's pretty.
Lisa : Are you saying that Charlotte is not beautiful? you must have some screws loose.
I don't know what to say.
Thomas : Well Now You Know... I am so tired of her bragging me about How Superior She is
She wishes she was white.
Lisa : Yes, I see what you are saying Thomas, gotta be careful with your words.
Thomas : Yes I'm fully aware of that, I'm almost 28 and I feel like Charlotte needs to seek help.
Lisa : Yeah , She will always be Herself, She's different Than You.
Thomas : Nobody Wants To Have Sex With Her.
Lisa : You Dumb Moron..
Thomas : Holy Shit!
FADE OUT
SCENE 2
DAY
10 AM
CAFE INT
Thomas : Hey Paige, Charlotte Still Wants To Be With Me, I don't want to have sex with her.
There is a joke about Asian Women, Though I Can't Say It.
Paige : Yeah Mr. Mclean Has an Asian Wife, you better Be Quiet.
Thomas : What? I am telling you she is an ugly girl, Darren Tong is the only Man That can support her. She has a grey alien face.
Paige : Hey, Hey, That is racist. If you hate Charlotte so much then don't provoke her, otherwise she'll kick your ass.
Thomas : Playing The Victim, I am a moron.
Paige : Shut the Hell Up Thomas.
FADE OUT
SCENE 3
Jeremy's House
INT
AFTERNOON
2 PM
Thomas : I Can't Believe I got into an argument with Paige Jeremy. She really Makes Me Sick to my stomach. Paige cries too much. I think she is a whiney little punk.
Jeremy : She's our Best Friend, And That's How You Feel About Her? Wow!
Paige is not your girlfriend.
Thomas : I know that dumbass, Paige is a virgin. She never had sex with a dude before, bro.
Jeremy : Wow, I guess she is a loner.
Thomas : Possibly So. She's our best friend, Remember That.
Jeremy : Yes, Yes I Know.
FADE OUT
FINAL SCENE
5 PM INT
Grocery Store
Thomas : Hey Do you Have Chocolates, Candy and Candles?
Clerk : We do, Check Aisle 4, Are you on a date or something?
Thomas : How did you Know?
Clerk : I Could Tell, My name is Tyrell Tyrone Johnson
Thomas : I think you better Call Tyrone.
Clerk : That's my name , I Know I am black.
Thomas : Oh Crap!
FADE OUT
Thomas ( VO) : Well everybody, Thats why you gotta be a man, not a wimp... i know what it's like being a dude and those who are not man enough for a woman, you are not alone i feel you
END OF EPISODE
Rated this logline