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EPISODE WHAT A MAN'S GOTTA DO (THOMAS)

EPISODE WHAT A MAN'S GOTTA DO (THOMAS)
By Kiara P Oxley

GENRE: Comedy
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SERIES TITLE : THOMAS
Episode Title :  What A Man's Gotta do
Thomas (VO):  It's been a few days since i got on Paige's nerves   and  She already knows I'm different then most men ,  I can't help the fact that i like intimacy , nothing wrong with that.
SCENE 1  INT
MORNING
HOME  8 AM
Thomas :  Hey Ma,  I am so glad That Charlotte No Longer Bothers The Hell Out Of Me,
She's a little wimp compared to me however  doesn't mean she's pretty.
Lisa  : Are you saying that Charlotte is not beautiful? you must have some screws loose.
I don't know what to say.
Thomas :  Well Now You Know... I am so tired of her bragging me about How Superior She is
She wishes she was white.
Lisa  :  Yes, I see what you are saying Thomas, gotta be careful with your words.
Thomas :  Yes  I'm fully aware of that,  I'm almost 28 and I feel like Charlotte needs to seek help.
Lisa :  Yeah ,  She will always be Herself,  She's different Than You.
Thomas :  Nobody Wants To Have Sex With Her.
Lisa : You Dumb Moron..
Thomas :  Holy Shit!
FADE OUT
SCENE 2
DAY 
10 AM 
CAFE  INT
Thomas  : Hey Paige, Charlotte Still Wants To Be With Me,  I don't want to have sex with her.
There is a joke about Asian Women, Though I Can't Say It.
Paige : Yeah  Mr. Mclean Has an Asian Wife, you better Be Quiet.
Thomas :  What?  I am telling you  she is an ugly girl,   Darren Tong is the only  Man That can support her.  She has a grey alien face.
Paige : Hey, Hey, That is racist.  If you hate Charlotte so much then don't provoke her, otherwise she'll kick your ass.
Thomas :  Playing The Victim, I am a moron.
Paige : Shut the Hell Up Thomas.
FADE OUT
SCENE 3
Jeremy's House
INT 
AFTERNOON
2 PM
Thomas :  I Can't  Believe  I got into an argument with Paige Jeremy.  She really Makes Me Sick to my stomach. Paige cries too much.  I think she is a whiney little punk.
Jeremy :  She's our Best Friend, And That's How You Feel About Her? Wow!
Paige is not your girlfriend.
Thomas : I know that dumbass,  Paige is a virgin.  She never had sex with a dude before, bro.
Jeremy : Wow,  I guess she is a loner.
Thomas : Possibly So. She's our best friend, Remember That.
Jeremy :  Yes, Yes  I  Know.
FADE OUT
FINAL SCENE 
5 PM  INT
Grocery Store
Thomas :   Hey  Do you Have Chocolates, Candy and Candles?
Clerk :  We do, Check Aisle 4,  Are you on a date or something?
Thomas : How did you Know?
Clerk : I Could Tell, My name is  Tyrell Tyrone Johnson
Thomas :  I think you better Call Tyrone.
Clerk : That's my name ,  I Know I am black.
Thomas :  Oh Crap!
FADE OUT 
Thomas ( VO) :  Well everybody, Thats why  you gotta be a man, not a wimp...  i know what it's like being a dude  and those who are not man enough for a woman, you are not alone  i feel you
END OF EPISODE

Nathaniel Baker

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